2010년 1월 26일 화요일

Haiku!!!


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Drops are moving to,

The winner will fall down

Drops are moving there


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Finally it ends

Storms are gone now forever

Its new day





They look very good

They were friends

Now they aren’t friends

Feelings and Experiences…

I walked out of way

Because I wanted to do

So I did walk out

Whenever I felt

I was wrong about that thing

Now I know that’s wrong


2010년 1월 21일 목요일

Ballad Assignment

4 Stanzas with 8-10 syllabus for each lines

I met a group of people trying to threaten a boy

I showed up like a hero and verbally forced to let them go

I still remember when that boy said he’s name was Roy

That moment I realized I was a hero


I always like to help others when they are in need

I don’t like being bullied by someone

I like to solve problems that haven’t solved.

Especially when it’s about relationship with anyone.


I just have in mind that I want to be a hero

I don’t have sympathy toward a bad guy

I don’t like people assessing my attitude as zero

I always think that bad people lie


I met a group of people trying to threaten a boy

I showed up like a hero and verbally forced to let them go

I still remember when that boy said he’s name was Roy

That moment I realized I was a hero




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A. What was the easiest aspect of writing a ballad? What was the hardest?
- while I'm writing I was frustrated to keep syllables in the same number. Easiest? well, the word choice was the easiest part...

B. Did you consult any outside resources to assist you in writing?
- Yes, I looked up on the internet related to my topic. therefore, I was able to complete!

C. Why do people write poetry?
- They want to enjoy, entertain the poem and to persuade readers about something.

D. What is an example of an excellent word choice in your ballad and why?

- 'blame'. The word itself is totally simple. But in deeper meaning, this 'blame' represents the regret, and the regret of my life.